Prompt / Lyrics
[Verse 1- Very atmospheric. A swirling, ambient synth pad and a distant, echoing electronic drum beat. No heavy guitars yet. Vocals are soft, raspy, and incredibly vulnerable.] The guilt is a poison that runs in my veins A cold sweat is drowning out all of the pain When the fracture goes all the way down to the bone It's impossible facing the quiet alone. [Pre-Chorus- the live drums enter with a rapid, driving tom-tom beat. Guitars fade in with a shimmering, delayed chorus effect. The tension builds rapidly.] The walls are collapsing on me! The silence is deafening, bearing its teeth! My own body feels like a grave! I'm begging for air, but I'm drowning in space. [Chorus- the track bursts wide open. Massive, towering drop-tuned power chords layered with tragic, stadium-sized synths. The ultimate 2010s metalcore explosion.] The hands on the clock are frozen in place! I'm drifting away in a comatose state! I slipped right back in the undertow! I'm just a phantom with nowhere to go. [Verse 2- The guitars drop out instantly, leaving just a gritty, distorted bassline and a tight trap beat. Very moody and isolating.] I'm pacing the ledge of the cliff Do I step in the air? Do I fade in the mist? The ledge of the cliff... Will I shatter below or just cease to exist? [Pre-Chorus- The driving drums and shimmering guitars return, pushing the energy back to the boiling point.] The walls are collapsing on me! The silence is deafening, bearing its teeth! My own body feels like a grave! Help me find a way out of the maze! [Chorus- he massive wall of sound slams back in with crashing cymbals.] The hands on the clock are frozen in place! I'm drifting away in a comatose state! I slipped right back in the undertow! I'm just a phantom with nowhere to go. [Bridge- the music completely cuts out. A single, haunting piano chord rings out in the darkness. Then, a slow, building, heavy rhythm starts to chug on the guitars.] Resuscitate! Reach in the dark and give me a pulse to accelerate! Resuscitate! Drag me to shore and give me a pulse to accelerate! [Breakdown- a huge, atmospheric breakdown. Not fast, but impossibly heavy and wide. Dissonant guitar chords ring out over a slow, syncopated double-kick drum pattern. Synth choirs wail in the background.] Suspended in time. Suspended in time. SUSPENDED IN TIME! SUSPENDED IN TIME! [Intrumental interlude] [Final Chorus- the heavy guitars pull back slightly, letting the soaring vocals take center stage.] The walls are collapsing on me. The silence is deafening, bearing its teeth. My own body feels like a grave! I'm begging for air, but I'm drowning in space! Comotose.... Comotose.... Comotose.... Slipped into the undertow.... Comatose!
Tags
Atmospheric synth metalcore, soft ambient verse, soaring, emotional male vocals, heavy drop A# djent breakdown, screams
Duration
4:39
Instrumental
No
Created
3/16/2026