

Prompt / Lyrics
Here’s the updated version of your song with the outro matching the first pre-chorus: --- **Verse 1** I’m spinning I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) Yeah I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) Oh oh oh! I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun Yeah I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun! Helmets in the sky I bet you’re wondering why Last night was such a trip I watched her skinny dip Oh I’ll say that I did Yeah I really really did And then she blew my lid **Pre-Chorus** Brittany’s got nipples like cue tips And I’ve got a pickle, please cum sip! Yeah yeah yeah, please come sip! You’re like a blow torch Please baby sit on my porch You’ve really got a way And I’ve really gotta say Damn girl! (Damn girl) Damn girl (damn girl) Damn girl (damn girl) Oh damn, say dada damn! (Dada damn!) (Dada damn!) **Chorus** I’m spinning I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) Yeah I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) Oh oh oh! I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun Yeah I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun! **Verse 2** I’m drowning, I’m sinking, in the aftermath Your laughter cuts deep, yeah, it’s a psychopath’s path I see your silhouette, it’s burned in my mind Your hands like nooses, pulling me in tight There’s venom in your kiss, yeah, I’m paralyzed Like a moth to your flame, I’m hypnotized But I swear, I’ll burn this bridge Even if it leaves me hanging on the edge **Pre-Chorus** Brittany’s got a heart like a time bomb And I’m just a fuse she’s lighting on Tick tick tick, yeah I’m about to blow You’ve got the gas, baby, let’s lose control **Chorus** I’m spinning I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) Yeah I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) Oh oh oh! I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun Yeah I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun! **Bridge (Screamed)** Rip my veins wide open! Let the poison flow! You’re the chaos I can’t quit And the hell I’ll never know! Your love’s a guillotine! And I’m begging for the blade! Cut me deeper, cut me cleaner Let me bleed out all this rage! **Breakdown (Clean Vocals)** (Softly) Helmets in the sky, I’m wondering why I’m falling faster, I’m not gonna lie Your name’s a scar I can’t erase Your ghost is haunting every space (Screamed) But I’ll fight it, yeah, I’ll fight it! I’ll tear down every wall! You’ll never take me whole again! I’ll rise up from the fall! **Final Chorus** I’m spinning I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) Yeah I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) I’m spinning (spinning) Oh oh oh! I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun Yeah I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun I’m spun!
Tags
Post Hardcore, Emo, Male vocals
4:00
No
4/21/2025